The Day After Tomorrow (2004)
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For this Major Design Project, I decided to make something that could possibly help and save our environment. I have been aware of global warming and Climate change since 2004 after I have watched the movie – The Day after Tomorrow. The movie shocked me, although the plot is exaggerated but who knows what will be happening to our world tomorrow!? Being alive for 15 years, I have never had a thought or care of the wildlife, nature and the environment surrounding us. From now on, I will cogitate about this issue seriously. I know it is time to do something little but effective that could save our city, our country and even the entire world. And we cannot be more selfish to our next generation.
THANKS 
Since watching the movie ” The Day After Tomorrow” in 2004, I have become aware of global warming and climate change. This film shocked me. The plot is exaggerated, but who knows what will be happening in our world tomorrow?
For this major Design Project, I decided to make something that could possibly help and save our environment.Being only 15, I have never previously thought nor cared for wildlife,nature nor the environment. From now on I will contemplate this issue seriously. I know it is time to do something, however small, that could potentially save our city, our Country and even the entire world.
We cannot continue to be selfish to our next generation.
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